get accepted."I love how honest that last quote is! One re-write
later, removing all the flowery language and working in more specifics, I
emailed out a new draft, first and foremost sending it to the people
that gave me those fantastic quotes. This time, a hard hat wasn't
necessary when checking my email:"Just make it flow sort of FIFA Coins like a narrative and I think you'll be good. The first paragraph was a turn off. Everything else made me interested.
Yeah!
That pitch is very specific and gives great examples of what you want
to talk about! I think that one is much stronger. If you can, maybe get
more specific about how you're going to prove your conclusion.
Otherwise, it's great!"Third time really is a charm. With my personal
proposal on solid ground, it was time to turn my attention to the Madden 18 mobile coins panel I'd been planning together with a couple of other animators. At this point, having just gone through
trial
by fire on my personal talk, I was able to work up a stronger first
draft.The benefit of a panel was that there were already two other
experienced people involved, which makes for an instant feedback loop,
meaning that I didn't have to bother all those helpful friends again
when looking for critiques. Needless to say, this talk also took
threerevisions, much for the same reasons as before. Got the core idea
plotted out on the first draft, went back to add in more
on
the second pass, then finally went through and tied it all together
into something that flowed well.It was between the second and third
draft of mmogo that panel that I had the opportunity to
get involved on another, and this is where working up the two other
submissions really paid off. The idea for this panel came about just a
few days before the deadline and had a lot more cooks in the kitchen.
Having written up the other panel's proposal, and already in that
mindset, I
